Two feet standing on the hill.
A road zigzagging its way
up to a destination, a hopeful
morning smiling to all greens
after a week of rain.
Well, you got the whole day-
greens everywhere invite you to them.
Meanwhile, on my desk, I have looked
at the news today: things that
I don’t want to read,
deaths that I don’t wish to anyone.
Someone somewhere is closing the
window of his soul.
And who does care, who does scold
if you wander away from whoever you are,
to look for your soul on the other
side of the hill, outside your boxed hopes?
♥**♥
I loved the theme of this verse… I am myself fond of similar themes as can be related by reading :
https://thewanderlustweb.wordpress.com/2016/11/06/nights-awaited/
It was a pleasure reading your beautiful piece of poetry archita.😊
Thank you. 🙂
Loved it Archita.
Thank you so much, Deborah. 🙂
So lovely!
Thank you so much. AtoZ Challenge is a beautiful place to meet people who will be our friends for many years. 🙂
Same here. Ignorance is bliss, they say. But I think, we should be aware of our world. Thank you so much for the visit, Nilanjana.
There is. 🙂 Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, Anne. 🙂
Totally agree. 🙂 Thank you so much, Eric. 🙂
Wow! Thank you so much, Subh. 🙂 I’ll definitely read and share my thoughts. 🙂
Ya. So true right? Thank you so much for your comment, Akshita. I hope you’re doing well. 🙂
Thank you so much, Vishal. 🙂
Michelle, your comment just made my day. Thank you for your kind visit. 🙂
Thank you so much, Parul. 🙂
What a beautiful post. Thank you. I found you on the a-z challenge list and I look forward to reading more from you
I read stuff that i don’t want in the news too. Liked your poetry. Delicate and sensitive. Well done
Best wishes,
Nilanjana.
Ninja Minion, A-Z 2016
Madly-in-Verse
Chills! So, so absolutely beautiful…wow. There is so much truth in this.
Searching for and nurturing our soul ought to be our concern, alone. Who cares where we go and what we do to keep it thriving? 🙂 Wonderful words, yours.
moving, heart felt. Brilliant writing as always ! Would love your thoughts on my recent short stories if you can !
@Subhmohanty from
And Life Unfolds
A for Alone B for Butterfly C for Curry D for Dance E for Edge F for Forest
G for Grin H for Homecoming I for Ink
“Someone somewhere is closing the
window of his soul.” Such a beautiful line. Wonderful piece!
Touching words when we look at downside of life and human tragedy!! Love every word and it pierces the soul:)
I loved the tone in this piece.
You have such a wonderful way with words…
Writer In Transit
Lovely piece!