Best mother, wife, daughter, employee– too many medals wrestle with their respective gravity to grasp a piece of you.
One life. Countless confusions. Limitless horizons. One destination.
So you rise high like the valiant smoke rings, light enough to swirl around presumptions.
Update on 5/21/2014: Thank you for reading and voting.
Thank you. 😀
Badhaai ho dear, for top seven!!!
Thank you, Shailaja. 🙂
Beautiful imagery! Loved all of it 🙂
Thank you. 🙂
very deep. nice.
Thank you. 🙂
Amazing.
Yes; that’s the ultimate goal. 🙂 Thank you for the visit and your comment. 🙂
So many hats to wear and only one direction to go…upward and onward! 🙂
Thank you for the visit, reading and your comment for me. 🙂
so thoughtful, eloquent.
Thank you,Christine. I wrote that line because that’s what came to my mind after seeing your wonderful prompt: “Which way to go?” Thank you for the gargleblaster and stopping by.
I loved the first line for its truthfulness: “too many medals wrestle with their respective gravity to grasp a piece of you.” It’s so hard to win those medals, and it feels like it has to be done. Don’t we all feel the pressure to be the best mom, the best wife, the best daughter, the best employee? I love where you took this question. Thanks for linking it up!
Back at you! ❤
Thank you so much. *Hugs* 🙂
Thank you Archita-I do think it is up on my older blog-will send you the link:-)Tc,love
Atreyee, I hope you’re doing well.
Thank you for stopping by today. I would love to read your poem; please share when you have time. 🙂 Rest well and tc 🙂
What a wonderful take on the prompt,loved it :-)It reminded me of a hindi poem I wrote some 20 odd years back-will share it with you 🙂
Thank you, Amit. 🙂
Thank you, Tina. 🙂
Very ethereal. Well done!
Nice One
Thank you, Jennifer. 🙂
Thank you, Susan. 🙂
Nice imagery and flows beautifully. Good job!
True and inspiring. I love the last line.
Yeah! Who knows where to find the best way! Thank you for the cheer, Ree. 🙂
I started writing when the grid had already 41 entries. Glad to add it there. Thank you for reading and the comment, TIZ.
Thank you, Jen. 🙂
Yeah, Individualism brings lots of changes. Thank you for reading, Vishal. 🙂
So happy to know you liked them. 🙂 Thank you for stopping by, Angie.
That’s great to hear. Thank you, C.C, for stopping by and the comment. 🙂
Thank you, Kymm. 🙂
Very pretty!
Love the last line…the way it evokes hope and grips the imagination.
Very cool. I liked the feel of this. And the countless confusions, and the swirling around presumptions.
That’s what I always believed in. Men or women, we have our identities and let’ make history with our lives rather than being confined to society’ gender bias:)
Oh i like this one! Too many medals..
Loved it so much, Archita! Glad to see your awesome entry on the grid.
No one knows which direction takes us to destination. Such a great take on that. Swirl around presumptions? Loved.